Pucker up

 

Poem: Pucker up

Time is ticking

Last time I checked

I’m alive and still kicking

Alive and kissing is what I wish to be

Kissing your lips

When you speak in front of me.

Good job you are cute

to have you real close and to place you on… mute!

 

 

Review:Pucker up

Get ready to be kissed! That’s what I am getting from the title of poem!

It’s a very confident start.

Curiosity has got me here and I am reeled in!

Attracted, yes, very to the other person the poet is.

But the poet wants to stop the talking and get in with some action!

To ‘be placed on mute” can be interpreted in two ways?

Way number one: Shut up! That’s what I’m getting here! How rude! I would then leave the space if was said to me or I would delete it if it arrived on my phone or screw up the piece of paper, if it was written, and BIN IT!

Or

Way number two: (I would prefer this one… I think?)

Time and the swift passing of it is concerning the poet.

Talking is great but I really want to kiss you! Wow, to be kissable, to be found attractive and to be told this is nice isn’t it? It’s not the sort of thing that happens every day.

 Okay, it’s not exactly ‘wooing’ in the traditional sense but there’s certainly a bubbling passion demonstrated with use of words.

A fun and cheeky poem?

That depends on the mood and mode of the reader and if the reader fancies the sender of the poem and is indeed felt wooed by it?

I’m certainly not. I would like to see where this goes, however!

I would love to see a second part to the poem, for it to be reciprocated in kind.

That would do it for me. It leaves me, the reader, to be open to there being a union being formed with equal cheekiness, fun and a happy conclusion.

An enjoyable little read.